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Dart Reference sheet by jmillart Dart Reference sheet by jmillart
Edit: redone compleatly

Dart is here! Dart is my werewolf persona. He rather enjoys his werewolf form. You'll probably see more of him so keep your eyes open!

BYU, Mac computers, Wacom Bamboo tablet, and photoshop are all Copywriten to their respected owners.

Big thanks to my friend Celestialwolf :iconlazywolf: for biting me!

I highly recommend you try *Kaylink's make a wolf [link] where I started to get ideas for dart from.


Critiques alwase welcome, I want my art to get even better,
Thanks!

Just a note. I usually wear glasses.

Please ask/tell me before you use Dart or his dogs in anything.
Dogs on Dart's Team: Ike [link] Knife and Dagger [link] Arrow and Hunter [link]
Gunner [link] and Kuna and Bruno [link]
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Well, this is my first critique, and I've always felt a bit weird when saying things about others artwork, since I'm by no means an expert... But anyways, I figured that I'd do a quick one for you, since we are both always striving to improve.

So, first off, I love this character. :) His markings are great too. They're realistic, but still pretty original. His story is pretty good too. I like that he hitches himself to the sled sometimes. It's a good detail, and it makes the character seem more real if he has a quirk that others don't.

Lets see, what else? Well, I think you did a pretty good job with the drawing. You've improved since you drew this though. One thing that i noticed though is that he doesn't seem to have hips. Granted, he's a guy, so he wouldn't have really defined hips, but it seems that his body just goes straight from torso to legs with no curve in the middle for his pants to rest on. You could remedy this by having his torso go more inwards under the chest. I don't really know how well I described that, so I could always do a red line if you want, but I don't want to feel like I'm telling you what to do or anything. Also, I think his neck may be a little bit too short, but only by a little bit. One more thing too, his pants look like they're hiked up a little too high.

Apart from those things, your werewolf looks great. You did an really good job on the paws and his head. And, of course, I already told you about how well you did his markings. And his wolf form looks great too.

Now on to the human. I think he looks pretty good. His proportions are all in order and everything. The one thing I noticed was his face. I'm not really sure how old you are, or how old the character is supposed to be, but the way the face is drawn makes him look older than he is. He has a really wide jaw, so you may want to give it more of an angle. Once again, I'm not really sure how to put it into words, but a picture's worth a thousand words, if you want. That's all I really saw that could have been wrong with the person, but then again, I could be wrong. Like I said, I'm no expert, and I'm still pretty bad at people...

Anyways, that's all I really have to say. I hope that I helped. I think that this is a really good character sheet. It's well put together. I applaud you sir :clap: ^_^
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PieIsAGamer Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student Writer
Well, where I live, there's no snow. But...There's soaring heat and humidity every summer. XD
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jmillart Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your missing out. Snow is awesome!
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wingwolf88 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
aww... 'w' awesome work, looks nice draw~ :)
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Kaamoshukka Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist
Do you "drive" dogsled? : D Yayy!
I have a siberian husky, and she runs in sled every winter :3 (I may try driving sled this winter ^^'')
Awesome work! : )
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jmillart Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, I'm a musher in real life, and quite happy to talk about it too!
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:iconkaamoshukka:
Kaamoshukka Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist
Cool! 8D
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Tesseri-Shira Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
BYU! YES! Cool 'sona!
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Tesseri-Shira Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
np!
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RamzaWolf Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010   Digital Artist
Hi, i wanted to use this character for thewolfpack contest.

But the problem is, my theme is usually quite dark and a bit off from this character personality.

Would you still let me draw this character? (i could show u my rough sketch which i did earlier) or it's better for me to choose others? =X
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jmillart Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Dark? How so?

As long as your not excessively gory you should be fine. I will not allow any sexual content. Besides that you should be fine.
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RamzaWolf Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010   Digital Artist
well, there should be some kind of bloody moment (but not showing organs come out or something =X )...and nothing about sexual content =X
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babywicked14 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010
dang ur character is complicated! so many colors. i will try my best to match it ok?

ur pic should be done today or tomorrow
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I tried to make him look natural as well as stylized. Thanks for doing such a good job!
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Kigai-Holt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey! My sister went to BYU.
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a good place. My older brother's going there when he gets back from his mission. As for me that's where I'm headed as well.
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shadowwolf9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
Like I've told you, You are getting really good, man! This is awesome!
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. Time and practice does pay off after all!
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:iconstokeman:
stokeman Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
Wow, your art skills have greatly improved,I'm impressed.
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jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! The only way to go is up I hope.
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lazywolf Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
This looks great! I love how you put Dart's character sheet together, plus I think this is your best work yet both anatomy-wise as well as with the fur coloring technique!

This gets a :+fav: in my werewolves collection!
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jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Celestial! :glomp: I felt like I had improved so it was time for me to make a new one. Thanks for the fav, and once again, thanks for the bite!
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feather-tail Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Shorts in anthro form, but not shirt? :o
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jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Usually. The fur kinda makes up for that.
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lazywolf Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
With fur, who needs a shirt (or shorts for that matter, but it's all personal preference :XD:)?
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feather-tail Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
I personally find that characters who don't wear any clothes tend to look like animals or cartoon characters, whereas characters who wear only pants or shorts look more like people who're doing so. The muscle definition helps give that impression, I think.
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lazywolf Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Yeah, I can see that.

At the same time, if I were a werewolf I wouldn't wear clothes most of the time because A) there wouldn't be any point and B) they'd just get in the way. Not to say I wouldn't for fun every once in a while, but...

Here's my character sheet to give you an idea of how I'd be: [link]
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feather-tail Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
*nod*

I like the ones like that best, that look more like animals than furry people with sculpted physiques and six-packs that show through their fur. It feels less like the uneasiness of watching a naked person show off, and more like the awe of seeing a wolf and knowing that it's a person at the same time. And that I could imagine being that way also.
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outward Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Awesome. This looks fantastic. : )
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :iconnewglomp: It's much better then it once was.
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:iconzaluke:
Zaluke Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
wow this is amazing john wow!
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! It's a lot better then what it used to be.
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Zaluke Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Well new always means better doesn't it haha. Yeah did you get me journal :) just saying all about these crazy old thanksgiving run around the place sheesh. I am glad I was able to enjoy wish you happy thanksgiving :)
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Enjoy yours as well friend!
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Zaluke Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
yeah I don't know just do what I need promise myself not to eat to darn much that for sure :giggle: dont need to get bigger sheesh. Aside I been thinking John hmm did you say you found a friend to do sledding with that good to know :) I was hopen you would hope they are trust worthy.
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jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a few in mind. I'll have to make a few phone calls though.
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Zaluke Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
Oh ok well as long as you can figure it out. Hmm what you doing right now free time or something?
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jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually I'm just headed to a friends. I'm doing a last minute post. Enjoy it. Also you might like *hawaiifan's art.

Thanks for being such a good friend to me. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Caiusthewicked Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
really nice ^_^
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! It's much better then what it used to be.
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Caiusthewicked Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
yes it is indeed your improving ^_^
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:iconjmillart:
jmillart Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Improving is good :D
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Caiusthewicked Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
yeah very ^_^
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Zaluke Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
He just keeps getting better and better doesn't he wow. Really good :clap: he make me strive to be better.
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Caiusthewicked Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
yeah he does
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:iconzaluke:
Zaluke Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2009
Yeah I like the way his character Dart keep evolving. Well I am up this morning are you still there I don't see you on messenger if your there or not so hey whatz up?
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