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Dart Reference sheet by jmillart Dart Reference sheet by jmillart
Edit: redone compleatly

Dart is here! Dart is my werewolf persona. He rather enjoys his werewolf form. You'll probably see more of him so keep your eyes open!

BYU, Mac computers, Wacom Bamboo tablet, and photoshop are all Copywriten to their respected owners.

Big thanks to my friend Celestialwolf :iconlazywolf: for biting me!

I highly recommend you try *Kaylink's make a wolf [link] where I started to get ideas for dart from.


Critiques alwase welcome, I want my art to get even better,
Thanks!

Just a note. I usually wear glasses.

Please ask/tell me before you use Dart or his dogs in anything.
Dogs on Dart's Team: Ike [link] Knife and Dagger [link] Arrow and Hunter [link]
Gunner [link] and Kuna and Bruno [link]
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Well, this is my first critique, and I've always felt a bit weird when saying things about others artwork, since I'm by no means an expert... But anyways, I figured that I'd do a quick one for you, since we are both always striving to improve.

So, first off, I love this character. :) His markings are great too. They're realistic, but still pretty original. His story is pretty good too. I like that he hitches himself to the sled sometimes. It's a good detail, and it makes the character seem more real if he has a quirk that others don't.

Lets see, what else? Well, I think you did a pretty good job with the drawing. You've improved since you drew this though. One thing that i noticed though is that he doesn't seem to have hips. Granted, he's a guy, so he wouldn't have really defined hips, but it seems that his body just goes straight from torso to legs with no curve in the middle for his pants to rest on. You could remedy this by having his torso go more inwards under the chest. I don't really know how well I described that, so I could always do a red line if you want, but I don't want to feel like I'm telling you what to do or anything. Also, I think his neck may be a little bit too short, but only by a little bit. One more thing too, his pants look like they're hiked up a little too high.

Apart from those things, your werewolf looks great. You did an really good job on the paws and his head. And, of course, I already told you about how well you did his markings. And his wolf form looks great too.

Now on to the human. I think he looks pretty good. His proportions are all in order and everything. The one thing I noticed was his face. I'm not really sure how old you are, or how old the character is supposed to be, but the way the face is drawn makes him look older than he is. He has a really wide jaw, so you may want to give it more of an angle. Once again, I'm not really sure how to put it into words, but a picture's worth a thousand words, if you want. That's all I really saw that could have been wrong with the person, but then again, I could be wrong. Like I said, I'm no expert, and I'm still pretty bad at people...

Anyways, that's all I really have to say. I hope that I helped. I think that this is a really good character sheet. It's well put together. I applaud you sir :clap: ^_^
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PieIsAGamer Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, where I live, there's no snow. But...There's soaring heat and humidity every summer. XD
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jmillart Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your missing out. Snow is awesome!
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wingwolf88 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
aww... 'w' awesome work, looks nice draw~ :)
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Kaamoshukka Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist
Do you "drive" dogsled? : D Yayy!
I have a siberian husky, and she runs in sled every winter :3 (I may try driving sled this winter ^^'')
Awesome work! : )
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jmillart Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, I'm a musher in real life, and quite happy to talk about it too!
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Kaamoshukka Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist
Cool! 8D
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Tesseri-Shira Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
BYU! YES! Cool 'sona!
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jmillart Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Tesseri-Shira Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
np!
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RamzaWolf Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010   Digital Artist
Hi, i wanted to use this character for thewolfpack contest.

But the problem is, my theme is usually quite dark and a bit off from this character personality.

Would you still let me draw this character? (i could show u my rough sketch which i did earlier) or it's better for me to choose others? =X
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